I liked this...OMG! You like Stargate? Well, you've just been reviewed by another fan...I really liked this poem and how each line started the same.

wow. very nice. It flows very well. Thx for r/r my poem.

Amy

ooh, interesting. i like the rhymes; they're not overpowering.

Effective use of repetition; very nice. Keep writing.

I like this one here...so sad..and nice rhymes. Good work!

wow, that's so sad... I like this poem. Although rain usually cheers me up.

that was really sad...

Short and sweet. The repitition works very well. good job.

Ah, it's all sad and pretty! Huzzah for repetition... Rather like that. And the bit about the goldfish dying...

Changing tone, I find this to be a very lovely poem. Innocent, charming, yet completely dark. The rhymes are there, but one does not notice them until they look, like that. "as I walked in the park," seems a bit out of place, but not so horribly so that it is throws the poem off (besides, it's needed for the rhyming!)

Anyhoo... me likies.

I find it intruiging when I cry and it rains. Seems like there could be a connection... rain is a very believable symbol of sadness, but it can also be sensuous or calming... you chose the destructive route, but your unique style of poetry enhanced it.

This interests me...its quite different and I like it. Well done!

I actually don't mind the rain most of the time, but I can see how it can be gloomy.

not quite sure why, perhaps because of the repetition, but i like it.

Very kool... thnx for the review XD and i LOVE the UK... i wanna move there sumday... snyways gr8 poem m8age... byez

nice repition and rhyming... the line about the goldfish seems rather random though... still i like it.. especially the end