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awkwardly beautiful
2008-07-27
ch 20,
abusethis is really good :]

please update asap!
Acy Yua
2008-07-26
ch 20,
abuseI'm ridiculously happy that you're continuing! This was so well written that it would have been a shame if you just stopped.

However, the fact that it's been a while since you last wrote is quite obvious in your style. The bantering is no longer Heyer-esque but more along the lines of...well, Julia Quinn comes to mind but not quite..., but what I mean is that there's a more current-popular-historical-romance-authors' flavor. Have you been reading Qunn, Enoch, Hern, etc.? Your previous chapter was the best example of sustained smooth wit that I've read outside of Heyer and this new chapter is quite jarring coming right after it.

I understand that after two years, your writing style is going to have changed. However, I recommend you go on a Heyer binge to get back into that mindset.

I hope this review hasn't been too disheartening. You're still an awesome writer and I'll be following this story till the end!
cherrypiesizzle
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseCalcifer! Howl's Moving Castle x)
Myztique
2008-07-23
ch 20,
abuseplease continue! this is written well and i like where the story is going. the tension between cassandra and harry is killing me!
naivete chica
2008-07-05
ch 20,
abuseoh i can't wait for more! please update soon. and a longer chapter possibly?
hippi926840
2008-06-24
ch 20,
abusee
i LOVE regency fics
and no one seems to be writing them anymore :(

thank god for you and 'the die is cast'
can't wait to see how its going to progress
MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!
anna
2008-06-20
ch 20, anon.
abusewow, im so happy to see an update! your style of writing is terrific. look forward to the next chapter.
ItalianQT
2008-06-16
ch 20,
abuseGood chapter! Update soon! :-)
Fluff Inc
2008-06-14
ch 20,
abuseI was so happy when I saw this update. At first I though the latest chapter was some sort of announcement about discontinuing this story -o- I'm so glad to know that you still want to continue this story c:

Right now I can't wait for the next one. I would love to see the reaction of other people towards the engagement of Cass and Winborne. And I'm just curious, but whatever happened to Frederick?
Le Meg
2008-06-12
ch 20,
abuseI think I read through this ages ago, saw you hadn't updated in forever, and then forgot about it. And then I was looking through the historical page today and saw it and thought, "Hazard... why does that sound familiar?" Ha ha, good times for all. There's nothing like gambling away your sister to a rogue.

Cass and Winborne are fun, but I feel like apart from the very beginning and that one spontaneous kiss, any chemistry they have is kind of forced. How they will fall headlong into romance at this point I have no idea - but there's plenty to work with, I imagine. I'm interested to see how you maneuver Cass especially, since she seems to be oscillating between defiance and resignation in regards to being his fiancee.

Eliza is pretty awesome, though. I kind of want her to surprise Boldstock, rather than have him sweep her off her feet unexpectedly. But I guess I'll see what happens. ;]
Angel-Leigh Jones
2008-06-11
ch 20,
abusehiya

love your story. i hope you are able to keep updating :) your on a roll. I love the name Cassandra - its always been a favourite of mine.

Your story is very well set in olden times. and i love it. keep going

angel
PeterMoore
2008-06-10
ch 20,
abusei was so happy when i realized you updated! so thank you very much and i thought it was a good chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next
dblack50
2008-06-10
ch 20,
abuseSo glad you decided to pick this story back up. You did a wonderful job moving into the next chapter even after so long of a break. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Bloodflower
2008-06-09
ch 20, anon.
abusewho is back, having deleted her account on account of college and various other things, but it's good to see that you didn't pass up the opportunity to keep writing! looking forward to seeing where this goes although. i do wonder...dear cassandra seems more weak here than vulnerable, which is what i feel she ought to be...particularly at the end. actually never mind i just reread it. brava!
Meg
2008-06-09
ch 20, anon.
abuseYou updated! I always loved this story and I got to admit I'm so happy that your finally decided to contiune it and hopefully finish. I understand writers block and how hard it can be. Please don't lose interest! You have a great plot and some great characters here. Please update soon

-Meg
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