Great poem! It shows how Jesus was God and a human wrapped up in one. May the Lord richly bless you. Keep writing for Jesus!
~Jesus Kid

If there was a way to make your poem to shape like a heart- that would be beautiful. I liked this one. So sad yet so promising.

God Bless

another heartfelt poem. may you and Jesus stay together forever and always. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

you transform a beautiful and simple verse into something so complex and meaningful there is reflection in every word. never stop putting your faith and religion into your writing!

I love your poetry... it's so beautiful... I've always loved your work!

very good and I enjoyed it

I don't quite know what to say to that but it was beautifully worded and flowed well. I love it.

beautiful. This is really touching.

-kacie-

Beautiful!

You seem to empathise well with our Lord. Sad yet triumphant. beautiful.

I feel the need to point out that the verse you're refering to happened when he found out his good friend Lazerus had died. Though i'm sure that's not the only time He did. The shortest verse in the Bible is probably one of the most powerful, in my opinion. great poem.

Very nice, awesome piece Blessed!
Needa S.

Fascinating emotions. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.