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| marshbar960 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseanother heartfelt poem. may you and Jesus stay together forever and always. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
| ... 2005-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou transform a beautiful and simple verse into something so complex and meaningful there is reflection in every word. never stop putting your faith and religion into your writing! |
| CancerianQueen 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI love your poetry... it's so beautiful... I've always loved your work! |
| mormonboy 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abusevery good and I enjoyed it |
| Beautifula 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI don't quite know what to say to that but it was beautifully worded and flowed well. I love it. |
| destinee ariarti 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. This is really touching. -kacie- |
| Lonely-River-Boy 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! |
| lulu 2004-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou seem to empathise well with our Lord. Sad yet triumphant. beautiful. |
| Aslan Israel 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI feel the need to point out that the verse you're refering to happened when he found out his good friend Lazerus had died. Though i'm sure that's not the only time He did. The shortest verse in the Bible is probably one of the most powerful, in my opinion. great poem. |
| Needa S 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, awesome piece Blessed! Needa S. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abuseFascinating emotions. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |