This had very nice imagery. In my mind at least - it had a kind of dark, haunting imagery. Maybe I'm just weird. (shrugs) Eh - I liked it either way.

not your best but is still above a lot of the pieces here, that's really saying something u know!merry christmas!

=summerdazed=

Not bad... good word use, it seems to make the poem as powerful as it should be. Great work.

~Lidless Eye

I like this poem.. nice rhyming and very cool

This is a good piece, I like it. It kinda fits with me lately.
Sorry, seems I've fallen behind on reviews. Life's been so crazy lately. I promise to catch up one day.