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Breath
silverdream139
2004-12-30 . chapter 1
Lyric-y, great rhythm. Loved the "blindly did she woo" and the verse about perfection...and the repetition of perfection. Very simple wording, yet you set the mood wonderfully. This is lovely.
Passage
2004-11-15 . chapter 1
That's really good. Unique and special, yet not too hard to understand. :-)
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