|Reviews for Just Us|
| R.J. Crosbie 3/8/06 . chapter 1
i was moved because i and a lot of people can relate to this whether they're in your situation or something totally different-but the feelings is somewhat the same. wonderful work!
| simpleplan13 11/18/04 . chapter 1
wow.. taht was so magical.. lol.. the ending especially, but I relaly like the part about love being only a word
| Frozen Darkness 11/14/04 . chapter 1
I like this poem a lot, within it's words I can feel your emotion towards this person. Love is only a word, but it one of the most beautiful ones to hear.
Bai bai ja ne 0.o Darkness
| bluesinner 11/11/04 . chapter 1
Again, Juliet dear, you bring up the issue of reality and realization. The interesting thing about this poem is that I kept on asking about the incident which had happened before the poem is wrote. This poem is surely a result of something heartbreaking, and delicious realization. Some people may think that this poem portrays sadness, agony, angst and other horrible feelings; but I view this poem as "portraying the moment of human realization towards injustice", which is a good thing. You go girl (umm you're a female, right?) You sure are a feminist poet. Yeah, that it.. A feminist poet.
Deliciously painful experiences wandering in your poem. A good thing for a person who knows how to describe his/her hurtful experience as a process of learning. Keep it up!
| asyousaid 11/10/04 . chapter 1
Here we go, adding you to the little "favourite authors" bit as we speak.
Seriously, this is everything: loving, tragic, intense, even sexy. Some of your phrases are expert, I really like it.
| miss.aishaj 11/10/04 . chapter 1
Wow. The feeling of love captured in such beautiful words. Amazing. I am not one for love poems and this length is not my usual but I thought I'd give it a shot and boy I'm glad I did. Great job, good writing.
P.S. Your review was rather empathetic and I am honoured that a poet of your standards thinks so highly of me. Thank you for your review.
| MusicalTearz 11/10/04 . chapter 1
Such a beautiful use of imagery and language.
| Just me.Jessie B 11/9/04 . chapter 1
hey thanx for the great reviews. i appreciate it bunches. this poem was great. i got the picture plus more. i also felt the sensual feeling that you put into it. keep it up.
| heartkreuz 11/9/04 . chapter 1
woah...your poetry is amazing
i love how you describe everything
its so pretty and really paints a picture
| Pamplemousse 11/9/04 . chapter 1
I really like this poem, it's so true to emotions.
keep it up
| Manuel Fajar 11/9/04 . chapter 1
Perfect, as only union can be. m
| PinkDaydreams 11/8/04 . chapter 1
wow, that was amazing. beautifully written. i especially like the lines "i want to pull myself in a thousand directions and cover you with the length of this feeling". great job :O)
| My-BleedingPen98 11/8/04 . chapter 1
*tear* that's so beautiful!