i was moved because i and a lot of people can relate to this whether they're in your situation or something totally different-but the feelings is somewhat the same. wonderful work!

wow.. taht was so magical.. lol.. the ending especially, but I relaly like the part about love being only a word

I like this poem a lot, within it's words I can feel your emotion towards this person. Love is only a word, but it one of the most beautiful ones to hear.
Bai bai ja ne 0.o Darkness

Again, Juliet dear, you bring up the issue of reality and realization. The interesting thing about this poem is that I kept on asking about the incident which had happened before the poem is wrote. This poem is surely a result of something heartbreaking, and delicious realization. Some people may think that this poem portrays sadness, agony, angst and other horrible feelings; but I view this poem as "portraying the moment of human realization towards injustice", which is a good thing. You go girl (umm you're a female, right?) You sure are a feminist poet. Yeah, that it.. A feminist poet.
Deliciously painful experiences wandering in your poem. A good thing for a person who knows how to describe his/her hurtful experience as a process of learning. Keep it up!

Here we go, adding you to the little "favourite authors" bit as we speak.
Seriously, this is everything: loving, tragic, intense, even sexy. Some of your phrases are expert, I really like it.

Wow. The feeling of love captured in such beautiful words. Amazing. I am not one for love poems and this length is not my usual but I thought I'd give it a shot and boy I'm glad I did. Great job, good writing.
Much Love,
Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. Your review was rather empathetic and I am honoured that a poet of your standards thinks so highly of me. Thank you for your review.

Such a beautiful use of imagery and language.
Wonderful
Nuff love
Matteo

hey thanx for the great reviews. i appreciate it bunches. this poem was great. i got the picture plus more. i also felt the sensual feeling that you put into it. keep it up.
jessica

woah...your poetry is amazing
i love how you describe everything
its so pretty and really paints a picture
-heartkreuz

I really like this poem, it's so true to emotions.
keep it up

Perfect, as only union can be. m

wow, that was amazing. beautifully written. i especially like the lines "i want to pull myself in a thousand directions and cover you with the length of this feeling". great job :O)

*tear* that's so beautiful!
Julianne