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| Marisa 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful. |
| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse...are you eternity? this ones like a riddle with no answer...i really had to think about that one. liked it alot. |
| Redmorning 2005-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseI love the flow and repeating of the last three words. It gives the impression of an echo sorta thing ^_^ |
| amazingblazes 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is really supertastic! The repetition of the last word in a line to the first in the next is really great. It really helps the poem flow. I'm really glad that this didn't turn out to be an angsty poem. That made me happy. So keep writing...you're doing great! |
| Coni 2004-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseheh i have a poem called "who am i" also... ^^ |
| Kalt 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuselove how it flows off from one line to the next! =P |