That was really good, I liked it better than the first one but they both rocked.

very, very nice. I like it a lot.

i like the last 2 lines a lot " to be alonewith myself"

As with the other 'wall' poem, fabulous, very good, very angsty and neat.

really good and wonderful

Oh this is even darker and even better, if possible.

It has a meaning and tells a story. That's what I think. Very well written with when it comes to the words that are written in such a flow. Very nice.

Another example of dark, viscous art. I must admit, I like the way you show your feelings through your work, basing your poems on raw emotion, whereas my work tends to be spur-of-the-moment randomisation. Keep it up, because angst and darkness make the best poetry.

I love it, this one and the first. The ideas and images are great and i can relate to both, keep it up.

I can identify with wanting to build a wall to keep everything out and yourself in. Solitary emotions are, I have found, to be the most complex. For being alone is a completly rebellious tendency and it goes against the grain of all sociaty, because by most standerds we are meant to have others around us. Very fascinating metaphore's.
Much love,
Juliet.