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| Anika Restien 2004-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the images it presents. It almost seems like the child has given up hope of ever being herd but yet it holds out a small string that some one might find. keep up the good work! |
| origamikitty 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI had to read it twice, but it has such a cold feeling when you read it. Hmm.. I always associate heat and coldness to poems though... oh well! It was still really good. |
| Matthew James Current 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, thank you very, very much for your kind review. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. I seem to be getting less and less feedback lately and am questioning my writing ability more and more, so whenever someone validates my work with a response it's always a very pleasent surprise. Secondly, I liked this piece a lot. It had depth and required a second read to see into its meaning. I think it's very nicely written. Very good work. |
| twistedtruths 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abusei liked it. very powerful with how the words flow and go. i like your style. keep it up! |
| CaptivatedTranquility 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseThis slightly reminds me of a child who has been abused their childhood. Although it probably makes no sense to why. BUt anyway, it's really good. I could relate to the point of it and what not. Keep up the good work! |
| nine iron 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseWith a strong idea set by the first few lines I was suprised to not see it reoccur in the poem bar one mention in line 11, that is the only fault I see that should be addressed. Setting off a poem so well it needs to continue to expand and engage the reader, not be omitted. Good luck with all your works Nine Iron |