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| Cyssel 2004-12-02 ch 1,   | Interesting piece of work, although I thought it would be better with more pwoerful, impactful phrases. But good job in bringing out your thoughts nonetheless. |
| Simple Life 2004-11-12 ch 1, | This is a very powerful poem... Good work!! |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-11-09 ch 1, | I like this, to cover both sides, the high feeling of taking the drug and the low feeling of realizing what the drug does to you after the high wares of. Its powerful and conflicting emotions. I love it, keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |