   LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 18Hey!
True. Very, very true! GREAT JOB! I love all of them, but I think this last one is my fav. KEEP IT UP! And remind me to review you when you update! I'm such a ditz, I'll forget if you don't! Lol. WRITE MORE SOON!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 17 Hey!
Well, yeah, but you can't see through anyone else's eyes but your own. Sucks, don't it? So, you can't truly decide what they think until, well, they tell you. And even then it's a mystery, cause what if they're lying? It's just too hard. Great job getting that across! NEXT!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 16 Hey!
Exactly. It always has to be YOUR fault. It can't be THEIR fault, oh no. Cause they're too perfect. They're too good. They're too INHUMAN! *grumbles* Okay, moving on! Great poem. I really like it. What will you think of next?
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 15 Hey!
Okay. GOOD! And definitely true. One of those thinking poems that make you go deep in your head and figure things out. To make you think to yourself 'hey, cool, I never really thought of it that way!' So good job! NEXT!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 14 Hey!
Okay, another dark poem. I take it you were in a sad mood? I like it, though. I've felt that way, too. GOOD JOB!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-03 . chapter 13 Hey!
Well, that's too bad. You need to be brought out of misery! GREAT JOB! I likie! Sorry I haven't been around in so long...Now, on to the next poem!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
 Catherine! 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 Hey Sarah Paige! I like the poem! I tryed reading the prequel to the blue cow one, but i hav like an attention span of a chipmunk. I'm going 2 read some other stuff, cya latr! |
| jordy 2004-12-13 . chapter 15 wowness! |
 NotA-Frayed 2004-12-07 . chapter 14I really like these. I was thinking of making a colection, but instead i made them seperate. Anyway, I like how in a lot of them the first few words repeat in every line. I didn't know if i liked it at first, but it is catchy. |
| LilLaTLuv 2004-12-06 . chapter 12 Hey!
These are good. I had a collection of poems, too. But that didn't work out so well so I decided to make them all seperate. It took a long while though. I like yours. They tell how people can truly feel at times. I love the Time one. It is so true. I liked a lot of them. Keep writing!
Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| Jordy 2004-12-05 . chapter 8 Aw SP this is relly good! but kinda dark, is my darkness comeing off on you ? |
 Alatariel313 2004-11-29 . chapter 7more awing (is that a word?) |
| Alatariel313 2004-11-29 . chapter 6 aww SP this one is kinda dark...I LOVE IT!lol |
| Alatariel313 2004-11-11 . chapter 1 Oh sp its so beautiful...lol
-J |
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