Wow, that was so awesome. When I raed that I was emotionless cuz its so good! Definately in one of my favs!

wow such a deep and profound effect!

This is a really sad yet beautiful poem it shows that physical perfection is not the answer to happiness, an illusion that a lot of people seem to beleive. Great writing
lozfairy x

Great poem. Tender subject with me as you know, but still good.

Wow, this is very very very deep. I feel the depression seeping out of the screen. Not many people can do that. You have talent. ..Im scared for you though...

Fascinating metaphore, Barbie is such a taboo subject now, the beauty that were taught to emmulate as children. Very fascinating, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.