Very nice description and a great haiku! I love to examine my personal features and somehow use them in my poetry.

I was compelled to read this after reading Manuel Fajar's Hello Kiss Haiku, and I'm glad I did. So many people have different views of this, but I perfer to think of it as a pretty haiku, something simple and beautiful.

Peace,Daze

The same, such energy in your works.

Nine Iron

How meaningless.

Cool stuff. I haven't really seen this style of haiku/tanka type of writing before, but its neat. I hope the hardcore haiku writers don't give you too much crap about it. Keep on writing... its good stuff.

I love the way you are very expressive in the shortest form.. it is brillant..

... Hmm... How can I put this?
Explosive words... Nice and easy!

Wow. Very powerful. I'm not a big fan of the colour pink, black is more my colour but still. This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work, Juliet. b_d
Much Love,
Suicidal_Greeting

Very feminine yet assertive. I could be wrong, but I feel that you know that you're beautiful, and you know how to get what you want. Power to you! I really enjoyed reading this piece. Two thumbs up! b_d

Pink... hmm... there a metaphor behind this? *COL!*

I feel like you're expressing your female attributes in this poems, or simply for justice, or simply sexual.
Or are you trying to imply that although you're feminine (the imagery of color pink) yet you're not frail? I kept on reading the poem over and over again, and I feel like I'm a person doing a soliloquy.

that was somewhat humorous.. I liked it

OMG—pink, . . . You're gonna kill me. m
Two eyelids flutter,
Though soft closed for a full kiss,—
Two strawberry lips . . .

very nice poem Juliet.

pink, the best colour ever.