A couple of subtle oxymorons here...I like it.

how many times i have read this... every time still so amazing. i don't know what exactly it is, maybe because i know you better than i did when i first starting reading your stuff, but your poetry just seems so real to me, like.. the way you portray everything is just so beautiful... sensory details.. heh heh... great job!

I LOVED IT! Wonderful imagery.
Julianne