Oh wow, I really really really enjoyed this. The characters were engaging and Koi is emminently likeable. I stayed up way past my bedtime reading this, since I got hooked after a few chapters. I'd love to see more if you ever got the desire to finish it.

Cheers!

You should continue this! It's one of the best I've ever read! I totally added this to my favorites.

O_o You just left it there?! NO~! Please, continue? This is really unlike anything else I have ever come across and I was really into it there...

Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.

I love it! i should've read it a LONG time ago, but i kept putting it off. Koi amuses me, and i love the way you've set it up. It's really well established, and the stories and adventures he gets into are wonderfully orchestrated and written. i can't wait to see what happens next, i hope you can update it soon, even if you've gone over the 50,0 words.

What an engaging and exciting story. I really liked it. It is hard to imagine writing this in only one month. You seem to be a promising writer. I suggest you make a carrer of it!