|Reviews for Live|
| eM 11/12/04 . chapter 1
hey a bit of forced rhyming in sdome parts but a good message and fairly well written keep writing!
| Archer In The Shadows 11/10/04 . chapter 1
Nice... I think the rhyme added to the effect rather than take away from it.
| from the north 11/10/04 . chapter 1
c'est vrai...et c'est un bon poem...vie est bonne...d'accord, je taise maintenent...a bientot!
| Ashes of a Willow 11/9/04 . chapter 1
I love the format! Very nicely said too. Keep up the good work