|Reviews for Maybe When|
| californiaone 4/6/05 . chapter 2
i liked all your use of adjectives and similies and stuff because it created all of these great images in my head even though the actual scenes were fairly simple. i also like how you unfold the story slowly and now just throw it all in at once...really nice. i like the way you write.
| Wosie 11/10/04 . chapter 1
hurry up with more. exellent and interesting. well written.