wow, finally she has a conversation with evan!
i think the way she obsesses over jared is...weird!
please update.

I like this story...and it's really interesting to see how your writing style has matured over the years.

OH WOW DOES BEDNAR COLLEGE ACTUALLY EXIST WOW it sounds like it sound be in London or something
^^ i used to live in valley heights, near springwood? and i never heard of it!! but im renting up in parramatta now because Im going to james ruse, in carlingford. it used to be like 4 hours of traveling a day -_- but wow! i havent read any stories situated here in nsw before! its usually melbourne haha. =D
-love haidee

This is a very cute fic and Alex has a great personality, although the other 2D female characters can get a bit tedious. Maybe theres more to amber...? maybe not. anyway, it was fun to read.

I love this story to bits please please update soon

these is a really good story.
I look foward to the next chapter.
Hopefully something will happen between Evan and Alex soon.
Can you also try to show more of Alex's real personality.
Cause sometimes she acts a little vain, and I don't know if she's joking or not, and sometimes she can be really nice.
Sometimes, she's just plain bitchy and stubborn.
What's the real her?
Cheel
--The MAjicK MakEr

i HATE EVAN

and Alex finally knows! You dropped lots of good hints early on so it was pretty easy to figure out, but Alex seems pretty dense when it comes to relationships and all that. Considering her personality, you'd expect her to know a bit more, but its really funny hearing her comments about it.
I really love your writing style in this story and the way Alex thinks, even though she's pretty smug and idealizes Jared an awful lot. And I really wonder why Evan was trying so hard to prevent her from learning that he has a fiancee. Your story is awesome so update soon! Don't kill me with suspense! T-T

WHAT?!?! How can you just STOP?! Argh...

I really like by the way.

WOW... nice finish. It was sort of unpredictable that it made laugh. Um, you have an interesting plot here. Maybe make Alex less Alex like. She may be funny at times but she can be a total ditz... so just saying work in your characters. The last chapter seemed rushed... just something to keep in mind. It was okay. Update soon. Bye

but i love evan and alex they = LOVE

*silently curses amber*

okay that was not a very intelligent review

but update again SOON!!


hearts

-whichwaytonowhere

A REALLY ENJOYABLE STORY.

Yay for another great chapter! FIANCEE? FAR OUT! Oh I can't wait to see what the whole deal is. How exciting! Congrats about the whole Uni thing and please update as soon as you can. Aren't you on holidays now, if you're starting uni this year? Which one are you going to and what are you doing? My cousin just got accepted into UNSW for Psychology. Hopefully you are doing something English-y related because you are a really fabulous writer! Please update soon! Hopefully you have lots of time to write, seeing as you probably have a super long holiday.

ZOMG.

FIANCEE? You mean to tell me that he's getting some arranged marriage? Or was he blackmailed? What grade are they in again?!

Or are they in COLLEGE? ZOMG!! Yeah, Alex gets really annoying at times as well.

PFFT...I've been getting a lot of 'You're short' comments DIRECTED TOWARDS ME! I'm not even short! I'm 5'7, which, by the way, is pretty damn tall. Except, per say, if you're a guy. 'Cause then I'm short. -_-" GAawd, guys are annoying.

So is that why Evan is over at the Leighs' house? Keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

Yay! Someone else from AUSTRALIA! We need to stick together you know? Ha! Anywho...

I like it! I really really do, and I think I'm falling in love with Evan... -sighs-. Its a weird name though, I've never heard it as a first name before, just a last name. But yeah, I like your writing style, and the characterisation.

I have to agree with you with Alex being annoying sometimes. ESPECCIALLY when she's with Jared. Its just like 'girl, get a GRIP, get some self-respect, GET TOGETHER WITH EVAN!' Ok, not the last one, but seriously, especcially if she does drama and wants to act she shouldn't get tongue-tied about a boy. Argh! See? You're getting me mad at your own characters and causing me emotional trauma! Thats how good at writing you are!

Anyway. I know its been a while and I hope you're still going on with this story. Update soon?

Happy new year!