Wow. That was beautiful. Verry interesting imagery. Keep up the good work!

This is phenominal. The last line is so cool! I love it!

Once again, whoa! I did not see that last part coming. Absolutely beautiful caption, from death comes life, love it.

Um- wow! I really don't know what else to say, but "wow!". The stages of hurt that is gone through and then... out of all of it... something else begins to grow. Beauty from torment- life from death. Only you could bring those together, in literature, so smoothly. ;-) Keep writing!