Hello again! I used to have an account here, but found it rather pointless since I have this wild fantasy inside me that I will someday in the near future publish a book of original poetry, and then I don't want everyone to be able to just come to a site and read it all. It's a childish obsession, but I can't stop dreaming, can I? Anyway, I love this poem! You've got the entire rhythm and rhyme, and you wrap it up like poems should- giving the reader something to think about. You should definitely post more poems, if you aren't dreaming of publishing them all like I am.
Oh, and as a bit of a side note, do you know I have a Cinderella variation on Fanfiction? Just wondering...