very nice i like this a lot, really captured the essence of summer. lots of love ~AllyCred~

yes, you are going on the faves!

Interesting flow and great description. The language was really good. I loved the line, 'The air is heavy, pressing down on us like a living beast.' The line just was really well done. It was a really good poem.
from fawny

and light fades in growing silence ...
summer storms are fascinating ...
keltica, the celtic fire