hey, that was pretty good. i do not pitty you like u said before, cause i went through a rough spot in my life. and i didnt want ppl to feel sory for me either. the poem was written very well. i like your style.

This is great, i know the feeling of falling into darkness. its almost as if u read my thoughts :D

It's good. Sure, it's an odd way of writing poetry, but I like this. calling for help because you're falling into darkness. I know that feeling.