Great story, lovely chapters. Although I couldn't help but laugh at your use of Chinese in chapter 16. Why did you mix English in with the Mandarine? But good job with your attempts anyways.
P.S. Blood is xie, fire is huo, and sleep is, well, one way to say it is shui mien. ;)

Shoulda told me that this was a prequel to AGT. But it was awesome either way! And It gaves some much-needed clarification for how sucky Thomas's life is.

Um, isn't Moma traditionally spelled Momma? Is it an austrailian thing?

Ha! see?! I can get motivated and finish reading things! ^_^ O.o man it was a good ending... The last 3 chapters were great! and I did wonder why that guy resembled Kel so much till the end~ ^_^ Love the descriptions! And the smotions were great!Man we rp'd that a long time ago... Oo

*claps* yay!!

Dear sweet Jesus Christ, will this boy ever get a break!? *Ahem* I loved this story! The way Vissal killed his aunt reminded me of the scene from 28 days when the guy killed that army guy. And making him eat his own toe? Just brillant!

And so it ends, XD Poor Thomas, of course it had to end on a bad note for him. Ah well, Sequel sequel!

I will look for your next story, I knew this story couldn't end like that I hope you start the new story soon.

*blink* I'm responsible for who Thomas is? Holy crap! I wonder if thats a good thing or bad...Ah well.

Damn poor Thomas...his life really sucks, eh? But he's still an idiot lol.

Can't wait for the sequel! Looks like its going to be fun with all the gods, sex, demons and cool sounding assassin. ^^

Lol I love this...but I must say Thomas does annoy me lol. Poor Vissal. Damn...I'm soo glad Alaric's mind is way tougher than his ^^

Poor Thomas. *hugs* he's such a angstmuffin.

Wow this took a very unexpected turn, I don't know what I was expecting but it wasn't this. I thought maybe Thomas would retreat into himself. But I never saw him getting more violent. I can't believe there is only one more chapter it seems so incomplete. But I guess you'll wrap it up next time.

One more as in one more chapter and then the end?

I feel so bad for Vissal. He loved Thomas.

Great chapter, nice in length!! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Yikes. I feel more and more sorry for Thomas and find myself wanting to break his mother's neck >.< Someone needs to show her what it feels like to be treated like dirt. On another note, this reminds me a lot of something going to happen to Squall in WS O__o I think we both have sick minds, lol.

Bwaha, I finally signed up to fictionpress so I can review your story ^.^ My hubby is whining downstairs so I can only read the first chappie for now, but... I love it so far!! So dark and angsty x__X Poor Thomas, I swear. He sounds so innocent and pure hearted... just like the little kid he is. Poor thing *sniffs*