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shootdocterallen 2005-07-06 . chapter 32
Ha! Drunken cherubs... reminds me of the Lucifer comics. Anyway, I got to skitter off and read the sequel. This thing is too goddamn addicting. Cyreina wasn't kidding when she compared herself to a drug. "snickers* Undead vote *snickers* Zombie pride!
shootdocterallen 2005-02-02 . chapter 31
Entertaining. But the mature Cyreina scares me (she's got an inner ** that just creeps me out). Both of them in the same body would be true insanity! But whatever happened to Pistol and the others?
Shadow Wolf1 2005-01-30 . chapter 3
Damn, this is funny, keep it up.
shootdocterallen 2005-01-25 . chapter 29
Damn the suspense! Okay, you seriously have to read the Sandman comics! The Cyreina's are like a strange blend of the characters Delirium, Death, and Despair. By the way, I love the random horror movie refrences (I'm a horror movie fanatic). Freddy and Hannibal are totally my favorites! Oh yeah, Saiyu being an incubus kinda makes sense... it explains the horns. Good times.
shootdocterallen 2005-01-13 . chapter 23
Two Cyreinas! *gasps* This is going to be amusing. I wonder what Saiyu's little favor is gonna be? And I understood you weren't a metal hater, I was just trying to prove that metal can be beautiful too.
Biest 2005-01-12 . chapter 21
what?!? Are you freaking joking me! I love metal! LOVE IT! Sokem only said metal was evil because of all the people that refer it to Satan. Eh never mind, that's in a new chapter. So read, understand and don't think Im a metal hater! >.
shootdocterallen 2005-01-12 . chapter 21
Oh, come on! Metal isn't that evil! What about the oddly angelic/demonic voices of Otep, Dez, Maynard, and even Corey Taylor? Or the beautiful instrumentals of bands like Malice Mizer, Nightwish, and Apocalyptica? Or the whimsical power metal of Elvenking, Hammerfall, and Sonata Artica? Or the background chior for Therion? Hell, even Dimmu Borgir has some stuff that sounds pretty (like the intro of "In Death's Embrace")! You can't tell me metal doesn't have it's own beautiful moments. Hell, anybody who's heard any Slayer can tell you that! *smiles sheepishly and steps off soap box*
shootdocterallen 2005-01-10 . chapter 18
All these new revelations are causing so many problems! Good thing Rietta's there, she may be homicidal but she's the only sane one left! Maybe someone should have told Cyriena that "normal" is just a made up word to make people feel comfortable. By the way, I have one beef to pick: Cyriena's sudden body shyness tends to contradict a lot of things she's done in previous chapters (just thought I'd let you know).
Blah246 2005-01-08 . chapter 1
lolz, so far i find this hilarious. very good work despite the typos, but thats really nuthin serious. i can vividly see pistol goin "BOOM B!TCH" lolz, keep up the work, lookin forward to reading da rest.
shootdocterallen 2004-12-21 . chapter 12
Zombies! Sweet jesus, this story has everything! Zombies kick **! They are my all time favorite kind of monster.

*does the happy dance*
shootdocterallen 2004-12-17 . chapter 9
"Pistol! Not in front of the gun!"

Ha! That was priceless! I started busting up in the library. People are glaring at me now... oh well. Good times.
shootdocterallen 2004-11-29 . chapter 8
Kickass! They didn't just play any old music, they played metal!! I'm trying to picture Pistol as a goth cowboy. Ha, brilliant!
shootdocterallen 2004-11-23 . chapter 6
The plot thickens! Fun! This story, is so my new fix. Keep it up.
jelie36 2004-11-23 . chapter 7
NO! I'M INTERESTED PLEASE UPDATE I'LL GIVE DOUBLE REVIEWS IF YOU WANT! Okay well that's not really possible but I'M INTERESTED! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

-jelie36-
jelie36 2004-11-23 . chapter 6
Wow, this chapter was amazing. I really liked it, it was the best one yet. I look forward to some more serious chapters such as this one. You have a deep theme, I really like it. Next chapter!

-jelie36-
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