amazingly acurate.

I was thinking Humor would be #3. (shrugs) I still like the format of this poem. It tottaly rocks my socks. thanks for the reivew, i love your penname. WRITE ON! (

For some reason this is my favorite poem of yours. I don't know, it just... gives me this weird feeling. I love the flow although I usually don't like poems that 'rhyme'... but this one for sure has the most perfect punctuations. Yep, luf it.

I like the rhythm on this, well done.

Wooho! Amazing! it's really really good!i love the first verse, about fear, i just think that that's so true!

Bravo! The rhyming (that's spelled wrong, isn't it? .

My favorite line had to be "delicate like a paper-thin leaf." I enjoyed the rhyming very much and also the wording.

I really like this one. You did a great job of describing those three emotions, and I agree, they are the three main emotions. I think that all other emotions stem from these job again!Sarah

I hate the word strife, I just absolutely hate it. But that's the only thing I don't like about this poem Very good, and it flows nicely.

Ooh. This was wonderful. You describe these emotions very well.

I like that too, I always say there are only three emotions anger, happy and sad. you took that concept and made it sweet

well, there are a lot more emotions, honestly. sadness? pain? hate? frustration? joy? ; these three may involve more emotions, but they do not sum them up

I like the way you express fear as something necessary and not as a useless emotion that keeps us from accomplishing. If we didn't have sensible, honest-to-goodness fear, we'd all think we could fly and...well...

Flying GOD...

lovely poem! very deep and emotionalnice!

aw thatz awesome. n thank u 4 reviewing my story :D