Found this story because of your LiveJournal... which I was reading because of your fanfics... of which I have reviewed several, under the name of Shiro Ryuu... So, first off I would just like to say that this was some of the best original fiction I've read in a while :) You could make some money off of this, seriously. To be fair, I guess I found the first chapter a little slow, but once it got going - wow :) I'm pretty sure that's because the depth of Mirana's character really improved over the course of the story - at least, I thought so. By the end, I was absolutely obsessed - I stayed up 'til midnight reading this thing ^^;; Everything fits together so perfectly, and the interaction between the three main characters was really moving at times - and the thing about the Viewer in particular really surprised me. So cool @_@ I'm a sucker for plot twists, I guess... And I have to give you an extra bonus for all the foreshadowing you did, now that I think about it... What can I say, but that I adore this story to pieces >_< (huggles story) Incidentally, I have crush on Pax now :)

very good story. I commend you on a job very well done

I have to agree with SeraphicTempest (duh, he's my twin bro...), this piece of fiction is a work of art. The story was great, just the right amount of action, adventure and you even manage to slip in morals into the underlying theme. Perfect.

My first impression was "cute, but kind of silly". Then I started feeling like there really was something there just under the surface. The more I read, the more I liked this story. I didn't want it to be over.Lots of reworked cliches (very well done) with only a trace of sarcasm. This really is a fun story, thanks for sharing!

Very nicely done, twisting in some unexpected ways, redeveloping, with lush imagery.

TERREFIC! Brilliant story. Shall put this into my favourites. Definitely a 5/5, great imagery, plot and character developement, just the right amount of suspense and action used with an expansive and accurately applied vocabulary make this a masterpiece. Guess this leaves you with time to complete the Digimon fics hmm? :P

And here, I thought he(Pax) was going to invent some machine of sorts. I just love your writing style. Unlike most other authors, each episode wrappes itself up at the ending pretty neatly but still keeps readers begging for more!

Definitely getting more interesting with both sides getting some hints more is going on. This is shaping up to be quite the story.

I have to say, I love reading your fanfiction and Background Music is no different. Still, I'm having trouble remembering the name, Nox, Lux, Vox, Pax, They're all 3 letters, and with X's. Overall, a very satisfying ending.

Fictionpress hasn't been kind for the past few days but I fianlly got a chance to read the whole thing. I just love the originaltiy in this chapter. You've turned an old cliche into a full blown original story. You really should get this published oneday. Some more explaination about Lumaria, it's technology, and magic if you please.

Most interesting beginning here. Not sure where it's going to go... more parody, a bit more angsty. Could do both. Interested in the use of powers there... I was sure she was going to go over and do something with the gun... pausing the action so the hero can work through it on her own is far more elegant.
Great start!

OMG this was so good.It was like it was written by a professional author.When you finish it you should send it to a publishing agency cause I seriously think they would print it.Please update soon.Bye.