please!! update soon!

lol hillarious story keep it going

Answer to your question: yes!My own question: Will you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon?Comments: I like the name you chose for Arc, it's pretty. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...this is getting very good!

-jelie36-

hey i really like the story, i can't wait until you update it! well...i guess that's it then.

~mizurazame~

Very good. Very random and fractured-sounding, but somehow it still is a really good story. Love the idea about the dragons and the Aquarius clan, although I read another, even more random thing a few months ago with an Aquarius clan that was part dragon... I'm not accusing you of anything, it just sounds a little fishy to me... anyway, the rest is different, and you're doing really well so far, so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!

Wow, awesome chapter!! Haha I can't WAIT to find out what's up with "Dad." UPDATE SOON! Sorry about the name suggestion though, I don't have any ideas. But I love love love the character, she's amazing. Great job, keep it up!

-jelie36-

*Waving hands mystically* You WILL update soon. You WILL tell us who 'she' is. You WILL show more fights between Arianna and James. You WILL put more of the Great Dragons into the story. *Stops stupidity* Anyway, this chapter was awesome. I really really like Selene's character in this one, it's the best version of her yet. Hahaha, I can't wait until you update, this story is one of the best yet!

-jelie36-

Book of Royalty... Lol...

Sorry if my uber-long review scared you. I tend to write long reviews (shrug.) Kay, here's the next one!~:~First Reaction: OH MY GOD(S) WHAT"S GOING ON? ~:~"The boy then whacked himself for the comment...Bad James. You do not make comments like that." YOu ever seen Trigun? The episode W/ Vash saving the girl's father? yeah...~:~Interesting dialogue.~:~"Inside a large cavern towards the back of the caves(Which had by now shown themselves to be a network of them)" This is awkward structure.~:~This is also v. colorful dragon.~:~Okay, read teh whole thing. V. v. interesting tlakies between the dragons. They're acting like small children! Middle schoolers! This is great for characterization, but the problem is: with such maturity, or lack thereof, as the case may be, these characters are goign to have some problems. Great dragons are powerful, right? WOuld you trust a fifteen-year-old with the ability to blow things up? ...Sure as heck I wouldn't. Anyway, nice story. Good job, and keep up the updates!Kudos!-PTG

Hehe. I almost didn't read it when I read the title "The Jolly Red Giant Bean". I saw it and I'm like oh great. But it turned out awesome! I love how the dragons have human emotions more than anything! Nice job!

Hahahahaha . . . the Jolly . . . Jolly Red Giant Bean . . . hehehe . . . It sounds like Santa trying to make threats! Geez, my eyes were watering when I read that. Nice twist in the plot. Hope you update soon! Hahahahah . . .

~Kaptain K~ *seriously rolling in fits of laughter*

Hahaha, this chapter was hilarious, as usual. I think Bolt and Frezia would be cute together! ^_^And let me take a completely random and totally wild guess here. Is it even REMOTELY possible that James is from the first house? I know that's probably far-fetched, but you know. ^_~ Lol, just kidding with ya. UPDATE SOON!

-jelie36-

Very interesting plot. You're doing a good job of drawing the reader in, and it actually sounds similar to the story that I've got posted! Strange. But if I might add a suggestion- developing your scenes and characters might be a good idea, i.e. when James gets sucked into the world. Wouldn't he be a little more panicked? How would he react? That sort of thing, I think, would make your story even better. Anyway, happy writing, and keep it up!

Lisa

The first chapter wasn't my favorite. It looked like you were trying too hard to make the story funny. But the following chapters were really good. Kind of reminded me of Farmer Ham (one of JRR Tolkien's stories), truly funny and entertaining. Hope you follow through and finish this story. ^_^

Jolly Red Giant Bean... a very very very very very random addition to the plotline. Funny, though. ^.^