Reviews for Transcendence Theory

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equine 2004-12-13 ch 6,	abusethis has got a good story line. i like it, but it's slow. i think there's too muc hthinking and not enough actually happenning. and to tell you the truth, i am getting slightly impatient - this is supposed to be a slash story and i assume it will be, but nothing has happenned yet. i know you've been dropping little hints that steven is finding himself attracted to riley, but doesnt a guy usually think about sex more than that? anyways that's my take on it. otherwise i love it! i hope you update soon! and i can sympathize with you about nanowrimo. i made it even less far than you did. so, update soon!
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2004-12-10 ch 6,	abuseYay for huggles. Lol. It was really good chapter. Interesting that its the same warehouse. I can't wait to find out how that all twists in it. You know, I'm not sure what Riley would have to do. Something really horrible to Steven, I guess. Add SOON!
Eagle Seance 2004-12-10 ch 6,	abuseBest chapter so far. it's great how you've moved the story along as well as explained a bit about the change of society (eg. religion) in the futuristic setting. as for riley, we wanna keep loving him so don't want to give you any ideas how to make him not so good lol. update soon.
SilentFyre 2004-12-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseAnother great chapter. Don't worry about it going slow. You are developing the characters now, and it is better to do it early so your readers get to enjoy them. (Which I have, indeed.) Now more thoughts rush through my small mind. Riley can't possibly be working for Marcus; he is too cute. I like the way you made him shy and easily embarrassed. It sometimes makes me think of him younger than he really is. Ah well, on to the next chapter then. I must read more! @_@
SilentFyre 2004-12-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseM deary, I am loving this story as well. The storyline is absolutely contagious. I am sitting here, hoping I can get to the next chapter to find these things out. My head is racing with ideas for how Steven ended up in the warehouse. Was he dropped there, or did Riley rescue him. It would be cuter if he rescued him, but then why would he wonder why he was there. Just too many things to consider. Anyways. At first, I thought that Steven and Michelle were going to end up to love each other, but then you revealed that about Steven. I should have known better. Off to go read the rest you have posted. But, you must keep writing. I am so hooked!
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2004-12-01 ch 5,	abuseWell, I'm guessing it was some sort of...sexual favor. Heh. Just a kiss maybe? If I'm right, eww. I like that you showed that Riley was tough, even though he sometimes seems a little fragile. Add soon, k?
Rae1 2004-11-27 ch 4,	abuseHis real reaction is in the next chapter, which basically equates to: major freak-out coming up! ^__^ Very interesting. Riley makes me sad. I just want to pet him. And Steven is so mean. :D You know. But, they're cute when they're being all friendly and silly, like over the dishes.
Eagle Seance 2004-11-24 ch 4,	abusewow. wonder what he's going to do now. update soon!
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2004-11-24 ch 4,	abuseYou're going to finish the story though, right? I hope you do. Riley is really adorable. Steven is to, but not as much. Heh. Can't wait for the next chapter!
seductivedevil 2004-11-24 ch 4,	abuseWonderfully written! You do such a great job with the confusion Steven is feeling and do such a great job with these characters too! I wait patiently for an update!seductivedevil
Rae1 2004-11-22 ch 3,	abuseYou didn't answer -anything-. ^_^ But I love you anyway. Riley is so CUTE! I want to pet him. Steven just crawled into bed beside him... I wonder how many times he and Michelle have done that very same thing with that same innocence. It shows a bit of trust to share sleeping space with someone. That bodes well for his relationship with Riley. Nice bit of character development.
Eagle Seance 2004-11-22 ch 3,	abuseGood story so far. Cool narrative and characters. keep going!
seductivedevil 2004-11-22 ch 3,	abuseThis is really cute! I really like what you are doing with the characters! Please update again soon!seductivedevil
seductivedevil 2004-11-21 ch 2,	abuseAbsolutely love it so far! Please update again soon!seductivedevil
seductivedevil 2004-11-21 ch 1,	abuseGood start! You are already doing a great job! Keep it up!seductivedevil

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