This was a good job.. but i wonder... just wonder, why did you have to mention 'Taiwan'?

Narq.

I think that you are a brill writer. I've read some of your poems, my friend recomended this one and I wanted to thank you personally for giving a fuck about those kids, even if it is only in words.

I LOVE THIS! Firstly because its like a bullet to the head. Bloody fuck it was AWESOME! Youre my 2nd insta-fave.

simply amazing, striking, and hauntingly real. -kismet.

Utterly amazing. I had to read this 3 times before the full effect of it really sunk in. It works to well I just...I can't explain how fantastic this is. This is so beautiful and I'm ever so happy that fp is finally working again.

Gah, when you write things like this I can't believe you actually like what I write. It's all too much, too relative, too fucking true. I love this. This is definitely one of your best pieces (like I can choose a best)...I love the /never gonna be, never gonna be, never gonna be pretty/. That is like the bow on top of a huge plastic barbie doll's head. Once again, you blow my mind into the stratosphere. Best wishes...

I'm listening to Kidneythieves right now, so that's pretty easy to imagine.
Again, you have crafted a beautiful piece of art with this. It's one of my favorites you've written.
A. Person

wow. this is fucking beautiful, jessica! i love it. "I'll be the biggest fucking wanna-be" i get this poem and it makes my whole chest hurt. you amaze me to the point of falling out of chairs. and i love it/you. (and i hope you email me soon) but keep writing and i'll keep writing.
:: love and faerie hugs ::
jerusha

i loved the whole verse starting with "i'm gonna be your should haves." this perfectly conveyed what you were trying to, i got it before i read your note. awesome song.

I absolutely love this! very well written and im sure that it sounds great set to music. Reminds me of my "Made In China" . great job and keep writing :D

Wow I like that song. really good. great job

Nice work! I was actually thinking this would be cool in a Jack Off Jill style before I even read your summary at the end. I love all the imagery you added in too...*thumbs up*