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Reviews For: The Last Poem

Androssganon 2006-01-30 ch 1,	abuseboring summery for boring poem. lol. just kiddin. ur really positive about our world arent u? ah well. nukes flying everywer, bush gone awol, australia is goin wtf mates?, and we cant seem to go 1 week noadays wer some miners dont get stuck in a mine shaft. were screwed. o what am i riting? o well WTF!
Weeba 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully written as always. I'm not sure I like the fatalism you express in much of your work, but I have to say it's thought-provoking. Free speech is your right by the first amendment, and it's mine too, but I choose not to comment on views I know perfectly well aren't going to change. You're a wonderful writer; don't ever stop. ~Weeba~
saccharine lust aerial 2004-12-10 ch 1,	abuseMer... I mean hi! I really really like this poem. It's great. It's really emotional and well written. You have a beautiful writing voice. Keep writing please!
SCD 2004-12-05 ch 1,	abuseYet another masterpiece of nihilistic existential angst from you. Darkly beautiful and intense. However, I'm going to share with you a quote from one of MY dead friends, C.S. Lewis, who was an atheist as a teenager and up to his early 30's. "My argument against God was that the universe seemed so cruel and unjust. …But how had I got this idea of just and unjust? A man does not call a line crooked unless he has some idea of a straight line. What was I comparing this universe with when I called it unjust? If the whole show was bad and senseless from A to Z, so to speak, why did I, who was supposed to be part of the show, find myself in such violent reaction against it? A man feels wet when he falls into water, because man is not a water animal: a fish would not feel wet. Of course, I could have given up my idea of justice by saying that it was nothing but a private idea of my own. But if I did that, then my argument against God collapsed too—for the argument depended on saying that the world was really unjust, not simply that it did not happen to please my private fancies. Thus in the very act of trying to prove that God did not exist—in other words, that the whole of reality was senseless—I found I was forced to assume that one part of reality—namely my idea of justice—was full of sense. Consequently atheism turns out to be too simple. If the whole universe has no meaning, we should never have found out that it has no meaning: just as, if there were no light in the universe and therefore no creatures with eyes, we should never know it was dark. Dark would be without meaning." Just give it some thought. Anyway, your work is incredble.
Space-ghost-boy 2004-11-21 ch 1,	abuseHoly **. or holy decay. Very good. Not very inspiring of good works unless you're trying to inspire someone to prove you wrong(; but it does hold truth...even if the truth is something no one will want to admit and believe. Mainly because when they do they will die. Anyways...I think it is very good and can't remeber what I found wrong in it. so good job...and stuff.
Radyn 2004-11-16 ch 1,	abuseDude, this was like, wrist-slittingly good, i can't believe how so blindingly awesome it was it was like an ** in my brain you genius you roxx0r LOLORZ!1 kthxbye
AntiPleasure 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseIgnoring Jenna is not cool.
lola-in-slacks 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseSex and death. Rolled into one! You cynical friggin necrophiliac. But yeah. Very good writing as always. Some good bits of rhyme as well, and general death-based imagery. Yeah. Good. Yeah. :)
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseThank you for reviewing my poem. When I write about necrophilia I am aware that some people will not appreciate and even be completely disgusted of it to the point where they could stop reading my work, but that's fine with me. I don't mind if you have a distaste for the topic, I find it refreshing compared to "Oh my god I love necrophilia". So... I'm just saying thank you for taking the time to review my writing, even though you do not agree with it. Tokiko As disgusting as it may seem... could one use necrophilia as a form of symbolism? Think about it.
scudcrow 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseLenghty poem or you could call it a short, short story...either way, it's written well: the starting and ending lines are repitive (in a nice way--kind of like proving a hypothesis)... Pl R&R my work :)
Cthulhu 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseMumble...Great poem once again, I take my hat off to thee fair wordsmith. Hypnotic and with a rhythym that seemeed to suck the reader into a vortex of potent imagery. Very, very good.
Made in U.S.A. 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseYour poems are so long but they're so well written and hypnotizing. Other writers have the longest poems but they're so boring but yours are so perfect and keep you reading. I really love your writing and your style and everything. This was another beautiful piece here and keep writing :D
Yuyuto 2004-11-12 ch 1,	abusewow, that was such an awesome poem or whatever it was, but that's not important, whats important is that this was very skillfully written and i love the fact you can't really decide if this a long poem or a short story. I loved it and i hope you create something that is as beautiful as this. And if you don't mind, please review my poem CUTz, I'm new to writting poems and i defiantly will look to your poems for encouragment to create a gorgoeous poem ^^

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