 Ironic Presence 2006-11-04 . chapter 1So beautiful, so exactly how I feel. Just one thing: "in the silken flesh of my heart" doesn't really fit right. It's just the "silken", really, that doesn't quite work for me. But the rest is perfect. |
 lovelikeamixtape 2005-05-02 . chapter 1Absolutely gorgeous. Reminds me of a song by Jewel.. 'Absence of Fear.' Amazing work. |
 Manuel Fajar 2005-01-12 . chapter 1Patient,—love doth wait,
(Patient love doth wait)
Heart that dwells for perfection,—
(Heart's dwelling of perfect grace)
Fulfillment's circle.
(Circle of fulfillment) |
 Ivriniel 2004-12-27 . chapter 1Beautiful. Again, I love your images. |
 poetic abortion 2004-11-28 . chapter 1::hugs you.:: ^-^ THis was so good !! @_@
~ Noelle ~ |
 Getuie 2004-11-16 . chapter 1Intense expressions of emotion.
"These are the cries I can share with none,
my madness, divine, by none understood,"
These lines were the ones I noticed the most... I could definitely relate with that. |
 Anastasia Who 2004-11-16 . chapter 1This poem was really good. Very nicely written. I love the use of symbolism and how it is written. Beautiful poem. |
 catseyeview 2004-11-15 . chapter 1I understand this poem as if this is my own. I feel there is a spirit through that helps you write this way...just lovely and uplifting. |