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| Ironic Presence 2006-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseSo beautiful, so exactly how I feel. Just one thing: "in the silken flesh of my heart" doesn't really fit right. It's just the "silken", really, that doesn't quite work for me. But the rest is perfect. |
| lovelikeamixtape 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely gorgeous. Reminds me of a song by Jewel.. 'Absence of Fear.' Amazing work. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-01-12 ch 1, | abusePatient,—love doth wait, (Patient love doth wait) Heart that dwells for perfection,— (Heart's dwelling of perfect grace) Fulfillment's circle. (Circle of fulfillment) |
| Ivriniel 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Again, I love your images. |
| poetic abortion 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abuse::hugs you.:: ^-^ THis was so good !! @_@ ~ Noelle ~ |
| Getuie 2004-11-16 ch 1, | abuseIntense expressions of emotion. "These are the cries I can share with none, my madness, divine, by none understood," These lines were the ones I noticed the most... I could definitely relate with that. |
| Anastasia Who 2004-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was really good. Very nicely written. I love the use of symbolism and how it is written. Beautiful poem. |
| catseyeview 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI understand this poem as if this is my own. I feel there is a spirit through that helps you write this way...just lovely and uplifting. |