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Ironic Presence 2006-11-04 . chapter 1
So beautiful, so exactly how I feel. Just one thing: "in the silken flesh of my heart" doesn't really fit right. It's just the "silken", really, that doesn't quite work for me. But the rest is perfect.
lovelikeamixtape 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
Absolutely gorgeous. Reminds me of a song by Jewel.. 'Absence of Fear.' Amazing work.
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-12 . chapter 1
Patient,—love doth wait,

(Patient love doth wait)

Heart that dwells for perfection,—

(Heart's dwelling of perfect grace)

Fulfillment's circle.

(Circle of fulfillment)
Ivriniel 2004-12-27 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Again, I love your images.
poetic abortion 2004-11-28 . chapter 1
::hugs you.:: ^-^ THis was so good !! @_@

~ Noelle ~
Getuie 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
Intense expressions of emotion.
"These are the cries I can share with none,
my madness, divine, by none understood,"
These lines were the ones I noticed the most... I could definitely relate with that.
Anastasia Who 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
This poem was really good. Very nicely written. I love the use of symbolism and how it is written. Beautiful poem.
catseyeview 2004-11-15 . chapter 1
I understand this poem as if this is my own. I feel there is a spirit through that helps you write this way...just lovely and uplifting.
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