das ist nicht nur ein geradezu magisches Gedicht, sondern deine Fußnote ist auch sehr lehrreich. Diese unsichtbare Welt kann nur besser sein als die sichtbare

Yay, Latin! I'm a Latin geek (Latin 5 student, right here). I really like the fifth stanza, and the way you said, "His crimson cloak of love for you". I felt as though it was being wrapped around my heart. It was so good.

This is so beautiful - a real work of art. I love the way you describe asking God's protection for someone dear to you. Next time I pray for that unbeliever closest to me, I think this will come to mind. A very comforting image.

Thank you.

I have just read it again. I really like the message in you poem. Simply beautiful.

i under stood what you where saying. Thankyou alot. And no sadly I did not see the passion. (I always cry when someone reads the crucifiction so I didn't bother.) But thankyou.

This was very goog !! our quite talented !

~ Noelle ~

Nice poem...it could also be a song. What do you think?

I like the wave of care that flows through this poem... the repetition of 'in the unseen' is also perfectly used. A great write... It's hard to see the 'more real than reality' that's within the spirit... It's something I fight with the most... But I could definitely identify with the feelings expressed in this poem. Beautiful

I really like this piece. I also like what you are saying about the spiritual realm being more real than the physical realm. Well, in truth the spiritual realm will last for all eternity and teh the physical realm, as we know it, will one day pass away. Well written, great job, keep writing! Luvs,
Bethy

Very good poem. I liked it a lot. Thanks for writing.

Beautiful writing from an "obvious" thinker and philosopher...