The last line confirmed this poems status as 'a work of art'.. You maintain a wonderful and strong narrative throughout this... Well done, keep going...

This is written so well! Although, I think in the last line of the first stanza(?) you could take out the 'and'. I don't think it's needed.
"The screen lights up and flashes in the dark:
an ugly, neon lime,
intruding on her solitude"
Those are really quite awesome. Nice job.