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Reviews For: Dedicated to the One I Love
scudcrow 2004-11-14 . chapter 1
Seemed like the feelings of an ebulient tyro on my first read. However, I must say that you do go into details w/o too much info about his feelings. But since you said that "Of the love that...because I can't Express it...", I'd said this is a good poem of you being quite expressive, on the contrary.
Also the last line about being agressive or patient leaves many wondering (because love is patient, kind, and giving--it's never jealous; always strong and ready to face whatever that comes)! Je l'aime.
Pl R&R my work :)
Fade 2004-11-14 . chapter 1
Hm...it is your determination that will keep you waiting for this 'HIM'
anyways...your hopes are to be kept up...even though hope is something that I hardly find worthy...Hm..anyways...about the poem..I found it pretty good...may be a little more detail(details on how you feel being alone and not knowing love) would have been lovely but anyways...I still think that this poem was good.
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