|Reviews for Nightmare Reality|
| Mozart Smozart 12/31/04 . chapter 1
You're got and interesting idea having the protagonist's tragic flaw being prophetic visions, but you really have to set them up before you knock 'em down you know? There's no real catharsis because you really just jump right into the life ruining shit. You really need to establish the status quo more before we'll give a rats ass about her.
Either that, or you weren't going for an Aristotlean tragedy at ALL, in which case due to the complete lack of any elements of the litary definition of a tragedy, I demand that you recategorize the story. I won't have my own sister further diluting the term by classifying every "sad" story as a tragedy.
Also: Am I the only one who pictured Asteern's voice as sounding like Vincent Price trying to sound like a woman?
"It's Devilish hot out. Yees... Mhahahahahahaha... I wish to fondle your buttox you see."
| Julie AKA Hugo priestess 11/14/04 . chapter 1
It's sp sad! But I like it, write more.