really sweet poem withalot of sensitive emotions. I love the similes and the outstanding imagery. great job. i'm sure whoever the guy is is very lucky to have such a beautiful poem written for him! lol. Keep writing, you have talent!

BeautifulEcho

I love this poem... it reminded me of when im gone by 3 doors down in an odd way.. this poem is so sweet and thats exactly how i feel with my bf.. amazing descriptions