great poem! i understood only half of it though XD

its still wonderful!

Hi !

Your poetry is very nice ! But the translate is a little... "no-french" ! It's too bad that french readers can't read your poetry because i find it very lovely and they express reals feelings.
If you want, i can help you to translate your textes and we will translate mine... my english teacher said it's a good thing to learn foreing langages !
So i've written a long message thus i think it's not very english but i think (and i hope!) you will understand me ^^

If you are okay, send me a mail, or let me a review please ^^

Bisous
Aurora