Hm...interesting perception of music...

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Woah, I read the first paragraph and prepared myself for a pretty little piece and I get a dark one! That's a really cool techinique to surprise the reader so much. This was really pretty the way it flowed was beautiful, great job.

Great! To me it's kinda like a poem but longer... I really like the last line. Great job!

How sad. The bit about hate, that is, although I can't say it is untrue. But does hate always prevail? I sure hope not.

Music can torment me, too...but mostly I just love it. Music is wonderful.

Overall I'd say rhis is a pretty good piece. I sure hope that you don't really experience this, though. (You said it was a story...that means fiction, right...no, of course not. I'm nuts.)

Sorry. I ramble. Good work.

How refreshing?! More of a poem that a short story, evne though it doesn't rhyme! LOL :-P! Each phrase was complex and multi-layered, making me think and ponder the points you brought forth. I think you have great potential as a poetic writer and I absolutely love this little piece. Keep posting these little things you might find quaint because I love them!