okay, that has got to be the best poem i have ever read.
but really, i loved it. you should really consider showing it to her. who knows, maybe she'll fall in love with you.
have you ever asked her out, by the way? or do you already know what she'll say?

This is very deep and touching.
"I'll die immediately inside, and my will to live will leave.
But if you stay, you'll kill me slowly and tearfully."
Those lines were so powerful. Brilliant job.

Excellent, I enjoyed and share your sentiments. Please r&r some of my work.