Oh, I like this. My favorite stanza is: "Raw, blistered feet don't allow her to walk/ Yet she doesn't stop, she keeps trying/ Hope lights her ever darkening road tonight/ Maybe one day someone will stop her from crying." I like the fact that she doesn't give up even though no-one cares. It makes the theme of this poem even more powerful.

Watch her pleading God for a new chance... I think pleading with God sounds better

Her soul must think all are heartless liars.. I think everyone instead of all or all men or people or something

I love this poem.. your poems are always awesome but this one was so pwoerful and sad and so true.. amazing job

I've always really loved that phil Collins song and this is a beautiful and moving piece of poetry, You really are a awesome poet :)
Lozfairy x