so sad.

Gosh, this puts a voice to my thoughts my entire freshman year of high school. :) Really though, it's just wonderful. Very well written.

Hmm..My annoying thought often popped out the question, 'Why don't that blistering dude never said anything back?!'

In the end, I understand better. In the end, I want to come to the conclusion that this girl is pathetic. But when I think for the better, she's not. She's sweet, and beautiful in her own way. I like your story.

That guy is missing something in his life. And that is, HER!

that's full of awesome. i predicted it, but it didn't ruin the story like prediction so frequently does.
she sounds slightly neurotic but in an honest,natural way. hah. wow.

ah!! *sniff* ah! I LOVE IT.

nice story. the guy does sound sweet.
^_^

Hm...an interesting work of fiction, to say the least. The entire work I noticed that he never said "I love you" back, and at the end I can see why. It really keeps you wondering throughout the entire piece, and you guess what there is between them, what he really feels for the main character, and so on. Very good job. Keep up the good work. ^_^
Take care,
Aya