SleepDontWeep
2004-12-18
ch 1,  | abusethese arent crappy.i got a tiny bit confused at one part but that was about it!the thing with rachel was just awful, by awful i mean sad not badly written,!i love the way sum bits are choppy and sweet while others arre drawn out and described heavily.u have a wonderful talent and if u decide to update this then i'll definetly take a luk at more of it!love and admiration Gretchen45xplease review my story 'she cant stop shakin and i cant stop touchin her'it's an attempt at sumthin.if u dont like that u myt like 'truly madly deeply' as its alot darker and more strongly written.anyways hope to hear from u soon! love ya lots! xx |
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