|Reviews for Controlled|
| simpleplan13 11/15/04 . chapter 1
I like it... very nicely written
| Deavon Brooks 11/15/04 . chapter 1
this poem is the best poem concerning control that i have ever read. it is not clear who you are addressing, but maybe that was the point. very powerful poem, especially since it rhymes, which is hard to do when writing about such feelings. great job! hope to read more of your work.