it has a lot of truth to the poem. what i like about it.

wow. this is really cool. rather depressing, but that's all that i write so... i guess that's alright!! :)

Absolutely loved it! I've been thinking lately, from the moment your born you begin to die. Quite creepy, not a subject to dwell on. Great imagery, Write On-
~Obsidian Eyes~

Aw...I love this poem. Everyday really is a funeral and a part of us is always dying its own suicide...but I'll let you be the poet. I look forward to reading more from you.

Very good indeed and powerful! Also very truthful.

It was strange, interesting, but also a bit on the depressing side. lol
But it was reallt well written.
Update soon.