"all that we see or seem is nothing but a dream within a dream"-eap

well, so far, i've read the eleven chapters in one sitting, it was good, and addictive...i like that element in the story...it keeps you waiting for more...
chow

Yeah, piece of crap. It cut off my review at the first line, making me feel like a complete doofus. Anyway, let me go on.

Chris isn't acting like a three-year-old, so maybe you should explain your wolf to human aging ratio to the rest of your readers. I mean, God knows you have more than I do. You /better/ keep 'em entertained. ^^

Eh... let's see, what else did I say... oh yeah! That fox is smart ^^ I wonder where you got the idea for him. You should put him in more. *snicker*

Write on, as always!
Ranuu

Oh, actiony goodness of cameos

Sorry for the "late" review, Kitty! I never ever go on AOL anymore...you must tell me your AIM screen name sometime, if you have one, so we can talk, 'cause I miss ya!
Your writing has definately improved; the description is awesome, and uses a lot of very unique words. Russet is going well, I'd say. ^^ As much as he shows 'dislike' for the heroic little furball, we ALL know he's just a big softy. =] Heheheh.
Can't wait to read more!

The bit about the human name really grabbed my interest. Nice bit of intrigue there.

But ...

You jump between the present and past tense. Please choose one. I noticed a typo or two, as well, so you may want to go through and edit the whole thing for little mistakes ... and for a handful of bigger ones, as laid out below:

Please cut the review whoring out of the story, and also the "Life, what is it but an elaborate play? It’s never been rehearsed never planned, but it’s a play none the less. It has an opening scene, which marks the beginning, a plot line that you’re never quite fully aware of, and a wonderful or tragic ending. This is the beginning of one such play, new life brought into the world of love, hate, and many other things." This contributes nothing to the story, and is rather pretentious and cliched besides. Oh my! Just like a play, life has a beginning and an end, what a stunning metafictional connection you've made!

Ultimately I've decided not to read on. From a technical standpoint your writing is very good, despite the tense issues, and the bit about the name, again, grabbed my interest; however, I'm simply too put off by the review whining and introductory paragraph to continue.

Okay, slowest chapter yet, but I'm gonna review anyway, because it was still good ;P

Hmm... opening up, Silv- I mean, Alakws acted almost like - eh... hard to explain. Hmm... okay, I think I got it. It's like a girlfriend moving in with her boyfriend, then they break up, and she's gotta find somewhere else to live. Well, she meets another guy, and moves in with him (not in a love way [yet, I'm told]).

Everyone views her as someone who would be on a street corner D:<

Anyway, yeah, she reminded me of that at first. Losing her mate and children, and she just moves in with this other guy xP

As for the chapter, it was tight and well put-together, as usual. All I could ask for in the rewrite is a bit more action to make sure your reader doesn't skip it xD It's full of lovely fore-shadowing for later in the story.

xD!! FINALLY you updated! Man, we need to start talking and roleplaying again! I miss ya, buddy!
Good job with this chapter! So unique how you ended it very much like the previous one! And don't you worry; you're not slaughtering Russet at all, so you can keep him in your GOING-TO-BE published book! ^^ I can't wait to see him on actual pages! ^_^

WRITE MORE! NOW!

I must have sat here for a good 5 or 10 minutes before I realized 'Oh wait, it's a human!' xD I'm so dense.

And the girl's father was attacked by a black thing?

...Russett? >_>

Oh man xD you ended it in THE SAME PLACE. Some reviewers might want to shoot you, since you made them wait so long, only to end here, in a full-circle, but I won't. Of course, that has nothing to do with you telling me you were ending it in the same place... of course not. Why would it?

And, eh... hmm... what to say. You're mean, you know that? Mean to human beings in your books. Poor Aderyn (whose nickname was MY idea :D), I feel bad for her.

Nevertheless, you rock at writing, and if I was still into giving you scores, they'd all be through the roof, as much as you've improved even in the few chapters that I've been around to review through.

Great job, and, if I may say so myself, write on!

Zomg! :O! Chris's momma! What's she doing out there?! I thought she was with the pack? I know she is out there trying to find him, but what about the pack and the other pups?! I just got a cool thought... If Russet and Chris's mother got together then Chris would get a cool not-really-gonna-kill-you-but-I'll-act-like-I-am Dad!! ^-^

A new chapter!

The only complaint I have about this is that it was so short. (Well, and that it took so long to update, but at least you didn't completely abandon the story.)

Yay, Silver's back! I liked the little cliffie at the end, that makes you wonder how everyone's going to react.

That's all I have to say, so update soon, please.

Aww! Well I'm flattered a few like Russet. :} He's flattered, too.Russt: Like Hell I am. e_e;ANYWAYS...very impressive dialogue you have in this chapter! I'm very thrilled to see S...Chris's momma back! -nudges Russet in the ribs- Ahaha...Anyways, try not to use the word 'dog' when describing Russet anymore. Nothing terrible, he's just a bit touchy. xD And remember, there isn't too much prey in his territory, which is why he had to result to you-know-what.

YAY NEW CHAPTER! :D It makes me uber happy to see the story come back. So... I told you this wasn't going to be the best review ever, and indeed, it won't be xP

Here we go, though. Silver... yay xD The return of someone thought lost. And.. well, you showed me the first five chapters before you posted it, so my response to that went out there. BUT... great ending, it leaves that little bit of a cliffhanger every reader wants xP

Yay! Nice new wolfie friend! Russet. Love that name. ^-^ Like a combination of Russel and... racket? o_O *cough* Yeah...

Like zomg! It wouldn't let me review for the last chapter so I shall review for last chapter in this review for this chapter. Zomg you killed Tilo! D: You kulled Tilo then j00 culled Taboe! ;-; Now Crhis is like... BANISHED and stuff! I do not like his family! >_< Except Mama... she's not as bad. ;~; Taboe...