Wow. A breathtaking choice of words. I also like that the ending is the same as the beginning.

Beautiful... wait a second... *stands from sitting position* you deserve this... *applauds*AMAZING... WONDERFUL... MAGNIFICANT!...nothing short of mere perfection sited through a silver glass! This poem glimmers with pride and...loveliness CONGRATULATIONS!-Amber

I am sure that the beauty of your imagry and passion of this peice, only mirrors your aperance in real life. Don't be so hard on yourself, my mother always used to say that every women is a goddess as long as she knows it.
Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.

It has a very dark and beautiful feel to it. I like it alot. Keep writing! D