It sounds great so far, I can't wait untilyou update...
You're story has me on the edge!

I LOVE IT! Especially Caleb the dog dog dog. Now all I need is a character named Emma... lol i'm taller that you!

*blinks* you got me a little confused with the jumping of times. like from 1708 to 2633. but no worries, i adjusted my eyes and found this enjoyable.
hey, didn't you say in your blog that sebastian is supposed to be a rockstar or something? cos he sounds yummy. a yummy demon.
the plot's moving so far, so i'll just wait in suspense for the next chapter. congrats, you've done it again and started on another wonderfully unique fic!

haha good chapter, good chapter. one thing is that i think you said Angelique's hair was black in the last chap, so u may want to check that. i look forward to updates!

i like this first chap. it gets things started nicely. im not sure how much of a stickler u r on grammer and stuff, but once u spell mordekai and then u spell it mordecai. hehe its so small, but thats all that is wrong with it.

Well, it's altogether too short to get any proper impression, but nonetheless, I'm sure that you can come up with something interesting. Just don't try to rip off too heavily of Heinlein et al.