|Reviews for This is For You|
| Infinite Abyss 7/31/05 . chapter 1
| Magic Marshmallow 3/20/05 . chapter 1
I like it. Sometimes it just doesn't fit right though, of course we have different styles. I would use different words in soe places but it's still apretty damned good poem. . You definately have some good writing potential if you practice a bit more and read lots! Hehe. Anyway, I like how you gave your boyfriend a poem to express your feelings of the breakup. I think that's a nice way to well sugarcoat it (in a lovely way, no malice intended here). Anyway, great job and keep writing! Alpha
P.S. By the way, I like your profile. . It kept me entertained, I also have a lot of the same weird traits as you.
| Ron 3/14/05 . chapter 1
Hi babylove, I got your e-mail about you changing e-mail. looking forward to getting your new e-mail soon. thank you. now me I just been sitting around the house. writing more is what I seem to grew into. my brother tell me that I need to get out more. but Like I say, my life is all a puff of air, than not even that. writing is all I know. maybe thats why I found you a friends who seem just as sad as I. (smile) now as far as me writing beauty peoms. I read through all of your. please lady, you're just as good as I. when you writing from the heart. thats when people would very much want to hear what you have to say. as long as you don't drag it along. just get to the point. like this poem you wrote about the break up between you and your boyfriend. it was to the point. yes dear young friend of mine you're gonna be a very very good writer some day. and I hope you remember me. and give me one of you book for free, (smile) well I got to go now. looking forward to you're new e-mail addess. love always the seeker of souls, Ron Campbell...
| pixy-dizzy 11/16/04 . chapter 1
The infamous poem. That's really cool, though, that you guys are still friends! short on time, sorry for uber short review, gtg!