very very powerful and wellwritten

Very complex poem. all lines rhyme, which is hard to do when writing poems about how you feel (it's hard for me, anyway.) Good usage of words. Adjectives are helpful in portraying the image of your poem. Great job! Poem's very deep and full of meaning... hoping to read more

Wow, that's a very raw and angry atmosphere you've got here. Someone must have run you over real bad. Excellent job.