I usually dislike two- or three-liners, but the idea for this was so amazing. Wow. Very suggestive, very haunting. I sat here for five full minutes, contemplating fourteen words (sixteen including the clever title). I sense a sort of oppressive theme . . . and a twinge of emotional pain. Of course, the true interpretation is with the author, though you had me thinking.

Excellent, really. I've read some of your other works (very unique formatting, by the way), and I think this captured my attention the most. :-) You have a very vivid imagination - your imagery in your other poems is very impressive! All the best!

-Kay

cynical suggestive reference indeed... or am i just horny?

Dark but i like it. Keep writing :D

How did I miss all these? So much said in such few words.

This was a short, but great poem! I like it like i like all the others you have done. There are so many good ones that you have written! I like them all! Did I ever mention that your username is awsome? "Faithless Juliet" It sounds so cool!

Hey! Thanks for reviewing my Poem!

I wanna say, that there need to be more poets like you out there. Im guessing that this poem is for Jessica, since you said all of your work was to her.

Awesome job! Very errie sounding.

-RomanceDeceptionist

Interesting...short, but something about it really grabs me...

Oh...cold, dark, eerie/seriously creepy, but stunningly beautiful...

*shiver*lovely-creepy!

Cool. I like the dark, mysterious feeling around these words. _

Oh, dark and beautiful. Excellent combination.

Very awesome stuff... I love it a lot. Thanks for the comments on my stuff. I hope to keep seeing your stuff on here as well.
Write on.

not really a haiku but still awesome

Hm... could be taken a many number of ways. Invokes the imagination to stir. I like it.
EvilNeko13

J—you are so good at provoking thought. m
Here's an echo haiku—
Somewhere without words,
Resonate cold bitter worlds,
In our deep dark soul.
m